2018高考英语作文点评_2018高考英语作文点评评语

高考英语满分作文赏析 赶紧收藏

第五档（很好）：很好的完成了人物并且作文覆盖所有内容要点，应用的词汇很多，在语法和词汇上的错误很少，能够完全达到写作目的。这类作文一般会给21-25分。

众所周知高考作文是比较容易的得分点，英语作文更是如此。高考前背几篇不同的英语作文范文，拿下高考英语作文轻而易举，下面我总结了三篇不同类型的英语满分范文供广大高考学子参考，希望能在英语写作上帮到即将高考你们！

2018高考英语作文点评_2018高考英语作文点评评语

2018高考英语作文点评_2018高考英语作文点评评语

电子邮件类应用文写作——餐桌礼仪

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some a.

If you he any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

满分英语作文—修改：We can't live with out air, but og is the problem we can't ignore.—校宣通知

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To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing toger, which is about the dlopment of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, ryone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, hing a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I he the confidence that you will he a great time.

The Student Union

2018福建英语满分作文

Dear Terry:

I am glad that you turned to me for a in regard to visiting a Chinese friend, and the following are some local customs which I suggest you should be familiar with.

Yours Sincerely

Alex

高三英语作文评阅？

Simple and ooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful

您好，这一篇作文的一些点评：

1）My dream job is pol which is considered as a wonderful occupation.

拿分点：使用了定语从句，其中 which 在从句中充当主语。

提分点：可以把 which 在从句中充当宾语，而 a wonderful occupation 充当宾补的结构，which many people consider a wonderful occupation（many people consider it a wonderful occupation 主语+谓语+宾语+宾补）

这里可以考虑把 my cream job is pol 改成 my dream job is becoming a polman。因为 pol 在英语中有3种解释：警界、警署；警察局；警察，比较容易导致混淆。

2）It's ten years old that I decided to be a polman.

扣分点：这里的 ten years old 指的是作者本身10岁时，所以主语应该用人，这里的 that 应该改成 when，因为定语从句中的 that 在句中充当成分，而从句的主谓宾都到齐了，所以只缺状语。可以考虑改成 It's eight years ago when I he decided to be a polman.（使用 it，需要改成8年前，我……），或是 I he decided to be a polman when I was ten years old. 建议改成 he decided，表示对说话时产生了影响。

3）That my father is a pol makes a different in my job cho.

拿分点：使用了由 that 的主句从句。这里可以考虑加强语气，起到（关键性）的，可以考虑添加 instrumental 或是 decisive；That my father is a pol makes a decisive difference in my job cho.

拿分点：这里使用4）Not only do I think this job is deeply needed by persons, but I can a great number of humans.了关联连词，还是用了倒装句结构和宾语从句的结构。

扣分点：关联连词的结构是 not only ... but also ... 或是 not only ... but ... as well. 这里少了 also 或是 as well。persons 这里应该改成 people。这里的 humans 应该改成 people，但因为前面用了 persons（people），可以把前面改成 society；也就是（被需求），可以帮助（很多人）。改成：Not only do I think this job is deeply needed by the society, but I can a great number of people as well.

提分点：句中宾语从句可以改为复合宾语的结构，也就是 Not only do I think this job deeply needed by the society, but I can a great number of people as well. think 的宾语是 this job，而 deeply needed by the society 就变成了 this job 的宾语补足语结构。

5）As for polman, potience and brery are the first standard for people who are dying to jion the lines.

拿分点：使用了由 who 的定语从句。

扣分点：potience 拼错了，应该是 patience。

容易混淆的地方：patience 和 brery 如是两个的特征，谓语用 are 没问题，但如 patience 和 brery 缺一不可，表示是同时间必须存在的特征，起到互补，谓语就需要用 is 了。

提分点：as for polman 可以考虑改成 to become a polman 作目的状语，也就是非谓语动词范畴了。first standard for people who are dying to join the lines 感觉是（中式英语），单词有点匮乏了。standard 可以考虑改成 requirement，the lines 可以考虑改成 the field 或是 the profession（因为前面用了 occupation，就不能再次使用 occupation。）。所以句子可以考虑改为：To become a polman, both patience and brery are the utmost/foremost requirement for people who are eager to join the profession.（这里用了 both ... and ... 这个关联连词结构，还用了 be eager to do soming 的固定用法）

6）And by coincidence, I think I he both the qualities so that I am competent to become a perfect polman.

扣分点：both the qualities 这里使用了定冠词 the 后面就需要加 of ……，因为定冠词 the 在句中充当（限制词），也就需要标明（限制范围）；否者定冠词 the 需要去掉为 both qulities 或是 both the qualities of patience and brery.

提分点：And by coincidence 可以改成 Coincidentally 会更简单明了；

7）What's more, I determine to study hard in ordr to make my dream job aded by others come true one day.

建议：由于这一句已经是结束语了，此时用 What's more 作为过渡词不太恰当。What's more 通常用来添加观点，而不是作为总结，可以考虑 All in all, In a word 等等表示总结的过渡短语。determine to do soming 的用法尽管没有问题但改成 be determined to do soming 的分数通常高些，因为这个不仅仅是一个固定搭配，其中的 determined 是过去分词作形容词，属于非谓语动词的用法。

整篇文章大概可以判为第4等级作文，也就是达到了80%的要求。其中的从句结构用的比较多，有宾语从句、主语从句、定语从句（which 和 who），还有状语从句；还适当的使用了倒装句和关联连词的用法。文章非常的流畅，适当的过渡词和连接词使用的比较到位（除了 what's more 以外）。文章比较大的问题应该是高中词汇比较匮乏。再来就是在文章中的宾语从句和定语从句属于初中语法点，没有用到高中级别的宾从和定从结构。所有从句的用法都比较中规中矩，没有适当的用到高中学习的高端用法，比如省略用法、分割式用法等等。

My dram job is to be a polman which many people considered a wonderful occupation. I he decided to be a polman when I was ten years old.

That my father is a polman makes a decisive difference in my job cho. Not only do I think this job deeply needed by the society, but I can a great number of people as well. To become a polman, both patience and brery are instrumental for people who are eager to join the profession. Coincidentally, I beli I he both qualities so that I am confident and competent to become a perfect polman.

添加了：

1）2个复合宾语结构（宾语+宾补）

2）使用了较多的同义词，或是词性的变化，避免重复使用同一结构或是单词，比如

to be a polman / to become a polman

I think / I beli

3）添加了一些高中词汇，比如：decisive、instrumental、profession、coincindentally，confident 等等。

希望这样的点评，可以帮到您。

高考英语试卷作文怎么批

Boys and girls,

高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得0-5分。高考英语作文，不管是全国卷，还是地方卷，都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分，字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下：1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2．评分时，可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，给分。3．概要部分少于20词或多于40词；全文少于130词或多于180词的，从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4．评分The above is all I can think of for now. Feel free to write me for further questions. I hope you enjoy your stay there and share with me soon what could most sibly be a wonderful experience.时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5．拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6．如字迹难以辨认，以致影响表达，将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档：（21—25分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。l覆盖所有内容要点。l语法结构和词汇有个别小错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。l有效地使用了衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档：（16—20分）完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。l应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档：（11—15分）基本完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一些内容，但基本覆盖主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。l应用简单的衔接手段，内容基本连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（6—10分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一，所用词汇有限。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对所写内容的理解。l较少使用衔接手段，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。档（1—5分）未完成试题规定的任务。l明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一，所用词汇不当。l有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响内容理解。l缺乏语句间的衔接手段，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分：未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。

如何评分高考英语作文？

高考英语作文评分标准及评分拿分点：使用了宾语从句，使用了 so that 的结果状语从句结构。细则如下：

档（）：没有完成作文题目Smog is serioius, （with）【which bring】 many kinds of diseases, really affect people’s lives.给出的任务，遗漏了主要内容或者偏题。阅卷教师会给1-5分。

第二档（较）：较少使用语法，内容之间缺少连贯性，不能把自己写的内容准确的传达给读者，阅卷老师一般会给6-10分。

第三档（适当）：就作文整体而言，达到了学写作的目的地;文中应用的都是一些简单的语句;虽然有语法和词汇的错误，但是不影响读者理解，这类作文一般会给11-15分。

第四档（好）：可能会漏掉一两个重点的内容，但是整篇作文覆盖了主要内容，语法也能够满足作文规定，这类作文一般会给16-20分。

高考英语作文好句模板：

Nowadays, （overpopulation） has become a problem we he to face.

高考英语作文 求详细批改

评价：开头朴实，用点花哨的东西，至少得从句吧- -

修改：decide / decisive

Smog means serious air pollution, and we can’t live without air.

评价：逻辑在哪里，咯噔一下，低分

Dirty air is harmful to our bodies.

修改：这句删掉吧

Recently, hey og （arrives）【appears in】 our country, which remains three week long.

评May I he your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.价：

修改：加一句“我们必须采取有效的行动”So we must take active actions to fight against the environmental problem.

【新段】

The hey og affect many places in China. 【In】Northern China, such as Capital Beijing, has been under serious pollution.

评价：正确

修改：

【What‘s worse】Even towns in the southeast【which narutally has fresh wind】 are under og.

评价：句型一般

修改：

【What has mentioned above causes a lot of problems. Such as】Drivers were not able to see views clearly, and children were encouraged to stay at home.

评价：没有过渡，突兀。低分特征，句子要自然而出

修改：

People who wanted to get ourdoor exercise hesitated, and ryone was not happy when they see the grey sky.

评价：结合生活，写的好

修改：

【新段】

I aocate that we【can】 live【in】 a cleaner life.

评价：原本想很好，但是实在看不下去

修改：

（Taking）【to take】 buses instead of driving cars seems a good idea, and recycled water is also a must.

评价：呼吁一般用不定时，循环用水和大气污染有关系？

修改：

Picking up waste on the floor and also reduce unnecessary waste.

评价：姐姐你写偏了。。。大气污染，不是环境污染

修改：

Avoid setting off too many firecrackers during festivals. We can also supervise the emission discharged by factories.

评价：终于回归了正题，句子写得不错

修改：

【新段】

I beli that we can he greener air and live a cleaner life in the end！

评价：结尾需加长

修改：加长加长！

英语作文评语大全

依式行文,文笔素朴,结构严谨评价：语法没错.

Formational style of writing and strict in structure.

内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深

rich contents,perfect ,broad andprofound meaning,

简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严First of all, if the Chinese friend of yours who you are going to pay a visit to has to work on a daily basis, I recommend you schedule the get-toger on weekends and arrive at the appointed hour since the family will he adequate time to purchase supplies, process materials, and prepare a feast. Chinese people pride ourselves on hospitality, so you do not need to bother to rack your brains for what you should buy as a present. The family will not mind at all if you simply show up empty-handed. Anyway, as they say, it is the thought that counts and you may come bearing, for instance, some specialties of your hometown in New Zealand, which I presume will suff in that case. As for table manners, since you are the honored guest, they will seat you where it is most convenient for you to tuck in. So, be the guest and yourself. Besides, there should be an extra pair of chopsticks and an additional spoon which can be shared. When you need to pick food, make sure to use the serving chopsticks for hygienic reasons.谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松

一篇高考英语作文 请点评 找出错误 并提出改进方案 并打分（以高考30分评定）

All in all, I am determined to study hard in ordr to make my dream job aded by others come true one day.

Parents always do...听起来太偏激，是Some of our parents try to do such things make their children feel embarrassed. Howr, understanding of parents such behior is very important for us.

不要用all, ry, nr,always等等这些词，太有主观色彩。陈述观点后，一定要给出举例说明。

For example,parents do check our school bags and diaries, because of...

，therefore,(restate your statement again)，再次陈述下你的观点，Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not suped to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a art cho.不用同的句子。说，I hope our students may understand our parents...

Thank you!